Good job. I can tell that you put time in this. My only criticism is an aesthetic one. I would put markers of different colors instead of the pictures because they are too big. They cover other details about the map. You could still use the pictures, but would have to put them in the description of the marker instead. You could pick a variety of colors for each ingredient such as milk and eggs and then include a legend to tell the reader what each color represents. -Nhi Nguyen
Great job. I agree with what Nhi said, maybe you can replace the pictures with markers and include them your description. Maybe draw lines between markers to show the connections - Jennifer Liang
I think that overall your map looks great! I think that it might be helpful to make a footnote about what the different colors and place marks mean, but I think it is really well done. -Lauren Capobianco
You clearly spent a lot of time researching all the locations of your company and I feel like instead of color coating the markers to what ingredients are, a time period color coated would be more helpful in this case because you provide many dates. You can also add in lines to show the interconnections of the lines. Overall, this has helped me visualize your paper a lot more!
Good job. I can tell that you put time in this. My only criticism is an aesthetic one. I would put markers of different colors instead of the pictures because they are too big. They cover other details about the map. You could still use the pictures, but would have to put them in the description of the marker instead. You could pick a variety of colors for each ingredient such as milk and eggs and then include a legend to tell the reader what each color represents.
ReplyDelete-Nhi Nguyen
Great job. I agree with what Nhi said, maybe you can replace the pictures with markers and include them your description. Maybe draw lines between markers to show the connections
ReplyDelete- Jennifer Liang
I think that overall your map looks great! I think that it might be helpful to make a footnote about what the different colors and place marks mean, but I think it is really well done.
ReplyDelete-Lauren Capobianco
You clearly spent a lot of time researching all the locations of your company and I feel like instead of color coating the markers to what ingredients are, a time period color coated would be more helpful in this case because you provide many dates. You can also add in lines to show the interconnections of the lines. Overall, this has helped me visualize your paper a lot more!
ReplyDelete-Steven Nguyen